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Title page for my comic's relaunch. I guess Mewtwo's involvement isn't a surprise anymore.
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i'm enjoying the overall tone of the comic, it's similar to the normal nuzlocke structure, but i don't know, theres so much little detail you've made you own, and it's turned it into a beautiful peice.
if (for sake of giving consturctive feedback) i had to pick something i don't like or you could improve on, it has to be the pacing, it's keeps flopping back and forth from these really well constructed scene that i just smile and nod, to a fast mess i have to read through three times before i figure out what's going on.
that's not necesserly a bad thing, because it's one of the thing that makes your comic unique, just when you are doing those fast scenes, make them...clearer.